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			<title><![CDATA[ Horror Anthology - Writers Wanted ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/12823/t/Horror-Anthology-Writers-Wanted.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I&#39;m putting together a horror anthology which I plan to self-publish. I have a couple of writers lined up already and am on the search for more short
fiction to include. Anyone who writes in the sci-fi/fantasy/horror/suspense realm, feel free to apply. If you are interested please send your submissions to me
at <a href="mailto:chop_top@live.com">chop_top@live.com</a> ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 10:05:48 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Cafe Doom&#39;s Fifth Annual Writing Competition is now underway ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/12670/t/Cafe-Doom-39-s-Fifth-Annual-Writing-Competition---underway.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ This year&#39;s fifth annual, free to enter, Cafedoom Writing Competition is looking like being the best ever, despite the generally gloomy economic outlook.
Recession - what recession? 
<br>
<br>
This year we&#39;ve teamed up with James Beach of Dark Discoveries, and Matt Schwartz of Shocklines to offer a very nice prize fund for the best stories. James
will be judging three winners from the top ten. He is stumping up the cash to pay the first place author five cents a word and will publish... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 22:55:14 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Thank you for your critiques... ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/12175/t/Thank-you-for-your-critiques-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I haven&#39;t been writing many short stories of late, so it has been quite some time since I participated in the Shocklines Writer&#39;s Group. Last month I
returned with a story, and you guys were great!
<br>
<br>
First, each and every one of you gave me encouragement and highlighted some of the things you liked in the work, which I appreciate.
<br>
<br>
Then, some of you gave some incredibly helpful, insightful critiques, which I doubly appreciate. I think my piece, and my writing in... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Wed, 05 Aug 2009 10:57:21 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Using "Was" and "Were" ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/12113/t/Using-Was-and-Were-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ How often do you use these in your stories? Does it really bother the reader if they are both used? ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (William Sheffield )</author>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 01 Aug 2009 04:05:36 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Leisure Response Time? ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/11913/t/Leisure-Response-Time-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I&#39;m curious...What&#39;s the longest you&#39;ve had a sub at Leisure? Anyone have any current response times for them? ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (scottajohnson)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2009 16:36:57 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ The Second Chapter ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/11755/t/The-Second-Chapter.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I&#39;m trying to place my novella, <em>The Poison of a Smile</em>, with a publisher (<em>any</em> publisher, lol) at the moment and although I believe the
story has potential, it&#39;s not quite as typical of my work or as marketable as my current WIP, <em>Ariele - A Ghost Story</em>. This is frustrating, as I
need to get somewhere with my writing as soon as I can, due to extreme poverty <img height="15" src="http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/happy.gif" width="15" alt="image">, so... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (SteveJ)</author>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 11 Jul 2009 03:57:07 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Air Jordan Shoes,Nike Jordan Shoes,Jordan Retro   Shoes|Wholesale。。。 ]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[ <a target="_blank" href="http://www.streetcandy.org/">HTTP://WWW.STREETCANDY.ORG</a>
<br>
We are wholesaler of Nike Jordan and Other Shoes in China. We are a professional exporting company in china. We supply many kinds of Shoes, such as Nike Shoes,
Jordan 1-23, Air Jordan, AF1, DUNK, Air max series etc. Most of them are in stock and can be supplied surely on time. All these shoes are packed with
original-boxes and cards our price $33jordan shoes,$15tshirt,15sunglasess, $13cap,$33jean,$35bag... ]]></description>

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			<title><![CDATA[ Orson Welles: Immortal Story ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/11718/t/Orson-Welles-Immortal-Story.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ My imperfect and brief essay on Orson Welles can be read in the <em>Cinematique</em> issue of <em>Sein und Werden</em> magazine:
<br>
<br>
<em>Certainly, his triumphs were remarkable, memorable, and have ensured the kind of ersatz immortality in which this myopic modern age specialises. But those
triumphs were past, Welles&#39;s hopes long dashed - why did he ruin his reputation?
<br></em>
<br>
<a target="_blank"... ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jul 2009 05:43:30 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Writers Wanted! ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/11049/t/Writers-Wanted-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ <p>Stories are required to be published in Novel form on the web site - <a target="_blank" href="http://www.englishnovels.net/">http://www.EnglishNovels.net</a>  The writers
having ready typewritten English Novels (.doc, .txt, .rtf, .pdf, or in any compatible form)of any genre, provided the novels should have the capacity to hook
the readers, should contact.</p>

<p>Email - <a href="mailto:onlinenovel@yahoo.com">onlinenovel@yahoo.com</a></p> ]]></description>

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			<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2009 19:47:24 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ I have fallen...but I&#39;m still here ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/10812/t/I-have-fallen-but-I-39-m-still-here.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I keep pushing back projects and reading. I have stories on the back burner. Hope you guys are continuing to write and submit.
<br>
<br> ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (William Sheffield )</author>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 13:57:11 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ The Helpless Man ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/10597/t/The-Helpless-Man.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ <img height="100" src="http://images.yuku.com/image/gif/935364c141f26dbdf96aeb57acca1f757508e5fc_t.gif" width="100" alt="image">He doesn&#39;t look very
helpless to me. ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Uath)</author>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 11:03:34 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Update On Me ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/10420/t/Update-On-Me.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I haven&#39;t quit writing. So, you can stop whimpering about my absence.<img height="15" src="http://www.ezboard.com/images/emoticons/tongue.gif" width="15" alt="image">
<br>

<p><br>
I recently started to get back into the swing of things. So, I will keep you all posted on my writing, and where it&#39;s going.
<br></p> ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (William Sheffield )</author>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 11 Apr 2009 11:15:30 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Guano tales... ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/9922/t/Guano-tales-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ Thank you everybody for suffering through my long submission for February. Due to health -and now family issues, I have been seeking to prioritize my projects,
so this was a to see if it I should continue-or shelve temporarily thing.
<br>
<br>
Some good points were made, but to address one. Rey, I cannot confirm if the Comanchie raided into the part of Mexico my opening is set in, so I will make them
Apache (good catch). However, Joe Blackhorse was a real Native American name I borrowed from... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Frank Menser)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 09 Mar 2009 04:51:45 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Writing exercise/challenge ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/9647/t/Writing-exercise-challenge.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ Not sure how good or bad this is to post here. I have a writing challenge of sorts up on HOrror-Web.com. Well, on the forum to be precise. Go check it out.
<br>
<br>
<a target="_blank" href="http://horror-web.proboards56.com/index.cgi?action=display&amp;board=fiction&amp;thread=88&amp;page=1"></a><a href="http://horror-web.proboards56.com/index.cgi?action=display&amp;board=fiction&amp;thread=88&amp;page=1">http://horror-web.proboar...&amp;thread=88&amp;page=1</a>
<br>
<br>
JimmyZ ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Bloody MonkeyZ)</author>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 09:54:13 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ A question about submitting short stories ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/9510/t/A-question-about-submitting-short-stories.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ <div class=" post-body">
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      <p>I have largely sold work to publications that accept simultaneous submissions, mainly because I am impatient. I don&#39;t like waiting 60-90 days for
      a market to get back to me with a rejection letter before I can try somewhere else.
      <br>
      <br>
      While that leaves a great number of excellent magazines to choose from -- Weird Tales, Cemetery Dance, Shimmer and Necrotic Tissue all accept... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Sanford Allen)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 11:45:08 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Historical Horror, What Did They Look Like? ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/8943/t/Historical-Horror-What-Did-They-Look-Like-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">I just finished some interesting research about men&#39;s fashion throughout the ages. I was thinking about
doing a portrait of Anthony Hopkins (Witch Hunter General) or some other 17<sup>th</sup> century themes. Here&#39;s what I found:</p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt"> </p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt">In General: Clothing was very expensive and people didn&#39;t own much of it. Nobles dressed... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Uath)</author>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jan 2009 05:08:54 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ See The Artwork Uath Did For Karswell's Website ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/8907/t/See-The-Artwork-Uath-Did-For-Karswell-s-Website.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ Karswell and I have been working to design some artwork for his website. He wanted ruins, winter trees, and a large, disembodied face. I sent him three
drawings to use at his discretion. Check them out:
<br>
<br>
<a target="_blank" href="http://www.castingrunes.co.uk/"></a><a href="http://www.castingrunes.co.uk/">http://www.castingrunes.co.uk/</a>
<br>
<br>
Karswell is a mystical, highly visual writer with a defined sense of atmosphere. An accomplished photographer, Karswell describes his... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Uath)</author>
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			<pubDate>Mon, 05 Jan 2009 11:07:33 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Let Me Introduce Myself-Horror Artist ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/8639/t/Let-Me-Introduce-Myself-Horror-Artist.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ Hi Guys,
<br>
I&#39;m a pen and ink artist with a horror theme. Here&#39;s my website:
<br>
<br>
<a target="_blank" href="http://www.ghastlydoor.com"></a><a href="http://www.ghastlydoor.com">http://www.ghastlydoor.com</a>
<br>
<br>
So far, I&#39;ve been published in:
<br>
frightfiction.com (UK)
<br>
Dissections Mag (UK)
<br>
Shadeworks Mag. (USA)
<br>
Sonar 4 Mag (USA)
<br>
Blood Moon Rising (Feb.) (USA)
<br>
<br>
I&#39;m always open to sharing my work with writers. Just give me credit. Go to... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Uath)</author>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 13:36:17 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ Perfectionism ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/8539/t/Perfectionism.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ My goodness....what is happening to me? I have a mild case of  perfectionism, where everything I write has to be PERFECT. Can someone slap me, and tell me that
I&#39;m going to be okay and that what I write is not going to be PERFECT? ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (William Sheffield )</author>
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			<pubDate>Thu, 11 Dec 2008 10:11:38 GMT</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[ What happened to the Art of Writing? ]]></title>
			<link>http://shocklinesforum.yuku.com/topic/8463/t/What-happened-to-the-Art-of-Writing-.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[ I edited this because I feel the subject is one that should be discussed--especially in the SWG and is important to serious writers; yet not a single writer
has commented so far.
<br>
<br>
So what about the Art of Writing?
<br>
<br>
The other night I was watching BOSTON LEGAL which happens to be my favorite show. To set the scene for those who might not be familiar, Alan Shore the attorney
was arguing in front of the judge about the quality of TV. His argument was that people are so busy... ]]></description>

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			<author>feeds@yuku.com (Frank Menser)</author>
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			<pubDate>Sat, 06 Dec 2008 15:30:06 GMT</pubDate>
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